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Five minute poem

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Five minute poem May 14, 2011


The rules: You have 5 minutes to write, edit, revise, whatever you want, and post the poem. I've discovered that you can find out things about your writing that you've never noticed before if you write up a quick, trash poem. I am going to post mine below

Quick Write

I am going to write this quickly
As quickly as I can
Just to see how well I will
Write in a short time span

If I tried to write this poem
Over quite a long time
My mind might register mistakes
In lettering and rhyme

So if this poem stinks
And flows as bad as Hell
Only has a few rhymes
And no rhythm... Oh well.

For this poem, you see
Was made on a whim
An experiment of sorts
So it might just be a sin

So please don't take this serious
Just keep laughing as you go
And hopefully soon I will write
A poem with more flow

Alright, that is my poem. Written, in only FIVE minutes. According to some of my friends, it's really good, but I didn't write it to be so. I'd love to see what you guys can throw out. Also, it's easier if you just write the first thing that pops into your head. Thanks for reading.

Also, review is appreciated, but I'm not going to do any more work on this poem, as that kind of ruins the point.


"If you make a man a fire, he's warm for a day. But if you catch a man on fire, he'll be warm for the rest of his life." -Terry Pratchett

www.oryuswriting.net

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Response to Five minute poem May 14, 2011


Okay, now that i look at it, this might have been a bad idea. Um, if you think it wasn't, go ahead and post, but I just realized it's pretty hard to just write on demand. So, um, sorry bout this. I'll put up something better soon.


"If you make a man a fire, he's warm for a day. But if you catch a man on fire, he'll be warm for the rest of his life." -Terry Pratchett

www.oryuswriting.net

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